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Wasteland

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  1. ashes
    Member

    Walk in the wasteland
    Of memories tossed aside
    & Dreams shattered on the rocks
    So dark & cold
    Feels like December
    Way down in my soul
    Looking at it all
    Unable to believe
    That once upon a dream
    The pale ghost (dying there!)
    Once was I
    Full of those childish hopes
    And these brightly colored dreams
    Now all that’s left
    Is this poor imitation
    A dried out, useless husk!

    November 22, 2004

    Posted 1 year ago #
  2. linda
    Member

    This is beautiful amongst all that i 've seen and read...
    If u could have taken some more care abt the text, cos...u'r aim is to weave a craft...of words and structure...isn't it...
    So whose your Poet?

    Posted 1 year ago #
  3. meddingdy
    Member


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